Disclaimer: Not for the young and the sensitive. Adult content ahead.
At an Undisclosed Location,
11:27 P.M:
“Child, it’s not safe on the roads and it’s getting late, want a lift?”
Nina looked sideways; the middle aged man looked like he was kind and his offer sounded tempting, especially when she was not dressed for the chilly night.
“Don’t worry my child, I’m a bishop at the local Pentecostal church and I mean no harm”
Confused as she was Nina didn’t know what to do. The harsh winter wind did no good to her mental state. It had been a terrific evening for her. She tasted alcohol for the first time in her life. But could she believe the stranger?
“Little girl, I can’t see God’s precious creation frozen in the night can I? Get in and make yourself warm and comfortable”
Nina had no other option; there was no other means of transport at that time of the night in her town. She had to open the door for opportunity to come in. She bit the nail.
“That’s my dear, get in child”
He opened the door and Nina went in.
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The only way to bring a change in the society is to write a book.
“Fuck man, they wear those skimpy outfits and expect us to stay quiet!”
“Yea, who can resist them? Except the testosterone deprived and earthworms?”
“You’re wrong mate, earthworms too copulate”
There are three kinds of men in this world, men who love women, men who love men and men who hate women. We hate the first kind, have no stance upon the second and love the third. Yes, we are men, we are men who hate women.
“We need to send a message”
The only way to bring about a change in the society is to write a book.
“What do we do? Shout at every girl? Form a group? Rape the skimpily clad?”
“Better than that, let’s write a book”
Bikini Straps and the Men behind:
The light flickered over head. P was blowing smoke rings all over.
“What shall we name it?”
“Bikini straps and the Men behind”
P coughed and spat the phlegm on the floor. The smoke wafted lazily through the air.
“Catchy, but will the women read it?”
1/3 rd’s of women hide their sexual feelings.
“I guess they will, they say curiosity kills a woman, here it sells the book”
“What will we write upon? Why girls shouldn’t wear minimalistic clothes? Or on how cleavages defy morals? Or on how men rape women.”
“Neither, words rarely create the tension but a picture does, a hundred page book with a thirty page description will do the kill”
“Now, who will turn to be a photographer? How..”
“Those cholesterol fuelled, make up masked, ‘I am still 16’ type of mothers with daughters half of their age should know, those ‘I love attention’ daughter’s of bitches should know, those..”
P didn’t exist. He was just an illusion just like the smoke rings.
“So a book with photographs right?”
“Yes, more or less the idea is the same”
“So who will our models be?”
P doesn’t exist.
Jack threw a list onto my lap.
“Hundred fine bitches, born in the richest families in the city. Families that live on a name, families that spend more time with cosmetics than learning ethics. Families scarred the by the change of face. Families that rear bitches”
P exists only when Jack says he does.
P coughed again. This time Jack kicked him in his stomach. P spat blood.
“What the fuck do you think?”
“What?”
“Okay, let’s think you have shot the photographs, compiled the shit and filled in the pages, do you think that will do the trick? It’s not a fuckin sex magazine, okay? Who’ll publish it? You? Do you have any idea on how a book is brought out? Do you think the police will rest their asses while we heat them from below? This, my friend is no Hollywood movie. This, is fucking reality. Submit the pile of shit, the very next moment you’d know how shit tastes.”
“He’s right!, he is fucking right! Our names will be written all over, we…”
“SILENCE!”
If Jack was out of his mind, we had to forget that we had one too. Smoke rings, pale, smelly and surreal. We were drenched in nicotine fog; we had the ‘up’ it gave. My eyes started burning.
“There has to be a way out, we are not fuckin prom rapists right? We are not grave diggers. We can think. THINK!, you measly little fucks."
There could be only one thing which could bring a change in the society other than books, the media.
“What if we fuck with the media?”
“What?”
“Yea, you’ve heard it right. Let’s give a call and say some stupid building crashed down and many people are dead. And when they arrive at the scene, let’s fuck with ‘em!”
“Are you out of your fuckin mind?”
I’m dead.
“It’s like scratching your arse with a Swiss knife; do you think that the journalists are a pack of shit brained nitwits? You’d become popular, but the message you want to convey becomes contaminated too. Is the smoke getting on your nerves? You fuckin…”
P coughed. I coughed. Jack had the power to unleash us, but he never used it.
“Movies!”
What? Smoke, cock and the shock? But it was Jack talking.
“Movies!, Fuck man, where can you get better coverage than them? Take a movie and put it on the net!”
I now know why Jack is a genius. He used some parts, unlike us.
“But what’s the story?”
“Dunno. Maybe a teen film or a documentary, who knows? A kind of film every one watches like crime...”
Books have a wide appeal and media a wider one. But movies? Not everyone watches every kind of movie. What kind of….
“Porn”
“What?”
“Yea porn. Every single person in this fuckin world must have watched porn at one time or the other. A fifteen minute video is enough to shake the foundations of a 15 year old and a 55 year old equally. In the internet age it can be easily procured without any hassles and the age bar is just like a gate to a bank which does not exist. Porn is addictive and effective. It has the mass appeal and also the emotional edge. Make a porn film and let the emotion flow, half the fathers in the world will take more care about their daughters, more girls will actually realize that something shown in the film can actually happen to them. We’ll raise the cocks to kill the chicken. We, will make our message clear”
“But, won’t our faces be visible?”
“Dude, it’s porn, we can mask our faces, it’s the chick that’s important.”
“And the actress? The money?”
“We should know better, come on, let’s go, let’s grab a drink apiece”
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Rum. It’s more like a cough syrup, just that it’s more pungent and more high rising.
“How chick!”
“Motherfucker, mind your own business”, the guy with the chick shouted back. P was on fire.
“Bitch, whore, you are the fuckin dynamite between innocent men. You…”
Jack kicked P at a place which men tend with care. P rolled out in pain,
“Mothe…”
“Fuck it man, have you lost your brain? It’s singles we are after, not fuckin sluts and traffic police”
11:32 P.M.
P was twirling under pain. Jack started taking longer drags. I was feeling sick. The chilly winter night was purging the brain off alcohol.
“So what about the movie?”
“Let the time come” Jack had his way.
Suddenly, the phantasmagoric atmosphere was filled with life. Along the long curved road came a car. Jack put his thumbs up and I followed suit.
The car came to a halt, a 50 plus something was behind the wheel, he looked harmless.
“Where to son?”
“Lexington Street”
“On my way, hop in”
We helped P to stand up. P sat in the front, while Jack and me occupied the back of the seat, only to find to our amusement a girl cuddled up in the back.
“Your daughter Sir?”
“No, some poor old kid in need of some help. The weather’s not been helpful son.”
“Hello darling, what’s your name?”
“Nina”
“What do you do cutie pie?”
“I go to school.”
“You look so tender; it’s been cold outside right?”
“It is”
Jack smirked.
Jack stealthily slid his hand down into her blouse. She shrieked.
“It is warm now kid?”
The car came to a sudden halt.
“What in the name of the Lor…”
“Get him P”
P, the silent man did his job. One straight kick in the man’s face, it banged against the door. And the very next moment P was behind the wheel and the old man on the street.
“Where to?”
“The room”
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Action. We took turns.
Jack was the first to go, I was taping the sound.
He slowly worked his way into action. He unbuttoned her dress. She kicked him but Jack was more like Hawk, precision and timing was all it required. And amidst the drama he started the avt.
“Every crime has a motive. Every crime has a reason. The reason for this is the oomph. It’s someone’s kid, but it might be yours next time or it maybe you. For every Centimeter decrease in length, there is an exponential increase for the probability of a rape.”
P fondled her. She couldn’t resist, she was like a roasted chicken, tied and helpless but bearing the pain all the time.
“And always the cocks win over the chicks”
And I entered the frame.
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Note : This is not the end. The video spread like wildfire over the internet. We are the porn makers of the 21st century. It's available for direct download at PornMania. You will not be disappointed.




All I can say is...AMAZING!!
I read the whole story and felt a chill down my spine pawan! Gory, gruesome, horrible... I din't have the guts of checking the link or whatever u gave!
Man, It was a brilliant piece of work! May be I shud have backed off after reading ur Disclaimer! At this time of night, am scared to death!
O_O
Am typing something stupid, let t be, ITS ALL FINE PAWAN! err....adjust with this comment!
judging from the comments above, i would say *thumbs up*...but the post was really good...:)
:O Oh my god! Amazing! Sad such things happen :(
Disturbing, to say the least. You wield a gifted pen. Did not have the heart to check out the link. Awesome narration, Pawan!
dude ... its freakin phenomenal man! congo ... send shivers down my spine!
nice piece of work.. lovely message..
but u should not have posted the link.. spreading child porno is illegal man.. anyway, i didnt back off even though im not an adult.. and i didnt download d video.. its not right yaar..
Repulsive!! But, at the same time captivating. You are amazing dude.... Am just too speechless right now to say anything!
i think i really should have taken the disclaimer seriously...it gave me shivers...its...i dont know what to say...i live alone and what u said scared me to hell...god help this country and us...
amazing work...
Great work pawan. You narrated the mindset of the characters very well. I am sure you'll go a long way.
And as shruti said, even i don't have the guts to check out the link.I feel your shouldn't have given the link here. But anyways, great piece of writing.
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shilpa
Found it disgusting but that's actually a compliment !! Honest. We hide our faces in the sand like penguins ; would be so much better if we sat up & took action instead of being armchair cynics..
Whew it gave me the creeps.The narration was very good.But the significance of some parts eluded me.
Like about P..why is he called P?just 'cause he is never given enough importance?
And these guys can't really be called misogynists.They are total psychos...no other word for it.
Anyway where didja get the idea from?
predictable story. i mean it is happpening around us. But still such stories help us gals be more careful.
the final para in bold has left me confused. you giving away porn links on your blog? or is it your own porn stuff you are advertising.
like your writing style..
came here through your post in writer's cafe.
Meenakshi,
The story is not about the end but the situation it points to. The final para though it states me going before the camera, the ending porn link is a different tale to tell. Download it and see, and I promise you, it's not porn and not even remotely as obscene. It will help ou to enjoy the post better :)
Cheers!
Your post reminded me of 'A Clockwork Orange'; it's so gruesome you have to keep watching/reading it to find out what happens in the end.
Cheers!
Ohk..I did not pay heed to the disclaimer. The story both shocked and disgusted me. Which just means that you are a very gifted writer.
Girls should always ensure that they have transport arranged when out at night.
PS: Saw your reply to Meenakshi above but still did not have the guts to download! Cheers :)
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. Samadrita told me about your blog n I must say- I love your works. I checked out your ling(with a hammering heart coz I thought you were promoting and that you are a perv). Thank God it wasn't as creepy as it sounded.
I think that porn is harmless though, but it has to be done in moderation and there should be some censorship on videos. Voyeurs shouldn't be encouraged and MMs clips totally barred. Anyway, real good shit man. Way to go.
Bdw, I write dark stuff too- you might want to check out 'The Watchmaker' on my blog. Its long but I would really like to know what you think about it.
Phew, good bloggers are not dead after all :D
BDW, I am following you now and added you in my blog list :)
Holy crap - you mean to say - this is a real story?!
And that vid there is.....*ugh*
So you are implying that the ideology that "For the better good" is used as an excuse for antisocial things? Yesh, its likely, no - it IS.
*sigh* We're so dead in the next few years. Makes me wonder if 2012 is the end of the world, not like how the movie portrays, but like a Social, economical or mental breakdown in Humanity - which might crush us.
superb man.. the way u think is amazing being with u for many times had never made me think ur writings can be so deep and heart touching. its great and purely "Pawan Maruvada" style of loking into a darker part of this world we are living in