“If you want to see your wife, come with me”
It has been three years since he saw his wife. Without a second thought he followed.
A sleeping pill and two hours later.
“Saskia”, he shouted. And he realized he could not move.
He was there with his dead wife, buried, Alive.
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A literary work will be considered 55 Fiction if it has:
- Fifty-five words or less (A non-negotiable rule)
- A setting,
- One or more characters,
- Some conflict, and
- A resolution. (Not limited to moral of the story)
This is my first feeble attempt at 55 fiction. But here is the catch, it is not original. It is inspired from a Dutch movie named "Spoorloos". I have brushed the 90 minute story into a 52 word literature form. Hope you like it! The above rules about 55 Fiction have been shamelessly copied from Indian Pundit's blog!




Nice debut :)
Btw,The conclusions of your posts literally scream! :O
I have read the plot of Spoorloos and I must say that you have captured the essence of the movie in 52 words in a damn amazing way!!
Liked it!
Way to go, Pawan!! :)
55 fiction..mmm....kinda liked it
read the plot of the movie and yes man ... you did well....
first time here..liked your blog on the whole...do visit mine!!
Quite a good first try...I for one can never write a 55 fiction...too short...too tough...hope u get better...and yes, i think it'll be better if the ideas were original too...
hey pawan!!
55 Fiction bug has bitten you too!!
Very good first attempt. I can give you 8.5/10
Marvellous i must say!!
btw,Check out my recent post re:)
Hey I love 55 fiction! And this one was very nice...But what kinda name was that!?! What does it mean?
Wow! Its like your usual thriller. Good debut.
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Pawan!
That's a good and touching 55 words fiction; I liked it :)
pawan..this is great... none would say its your first attempt... really good one dude....
hey i see u r a movie bluff :)
my blog is about movies ,i wud be glad if u cud comment on them so that it helps me make it better :)
btw i love ur 55-fiction & ur blog :)
will surely follow up :)
keep blogging..
cheers!!
1st i must say u r a honest soul dat u dint took da credit of copyin....but da 55word thing was your original and it was too good... loved it loved it lvoed it.. *claps*
ps: can i try it?? wer should i send u , IF incase i succeed in writting sm thng like dis, chances are rare but still i want to try... wat say?
i loved it pawan absolutely loved it, greatly put, really awesome
take care and keep writing.........
Good one!
That was really well written..
Its nice that u have put up what FIction 55 means..
Make website india
Hey Pawan
Good one......great debut yaar.
When will your next thriller come??
that was a good one.. should watch that movie (with english subtitles ofcourse)
hmmm.
well to be frank its the first time that ive come to know of something called 55 Fiction...
being a novice i dont think my comments hold any value....
but surely i can make out one thing and that is this doesnt seem to be a debut article for 55 fiction
So i must congratulate u for that!!!
:)
You are one terrific writer dude. I think you should soon write a fiction book.